Friday, December 5, 2008
The man who could see elephants
The man's problem was that he wanted to learn how to carve. For example if I had would have been there that would have happened.Another example is that My friend would have done the same.Third example is that we need to learn. Clearly I think that its good to learn.
The problem is solved by helping the boy.For example if that would have happened to me he would help me to.Another example is that if the old man was mean forget it.Third example is that its good to help.For that reason i think its OK to help.
I think what would happen is that hes going to become a caver.For example hes good at it. Another example is that he is a okay boy . Third example is that he learned how to caver.Clearly I think hes going to become a caver plus he stay caver for 2 years.
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Dear Emily,
I like your blog post because your picture haves elephants and the story is about elephants.The best part of your essay is the examples.
Sincerely Amy Ortiz
Dear Emily,
I like it because it is really good and it has good details.
Dear Emily
I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story
the best part is when you explain and gave example
one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces
dear emily you suck
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