Friday, December 5, 2008

The man who could see elephants

The man's problem was that he wanted to learn how to carve. For example if I had would have been there that would have happened.Another example is that My friend would have done the same.Third example is that we need to learn. Clearly I think that its good to learn.

The problem is solved by helping the boy.For example if that would have happened to me he would help me to.Another example is that if the old man was mean forget it.Third example is that its good to help.
For that reason i think its OK to help.

I think what would happen is that hes going to become a caver.For example hes good at it. Another example is that he is a okay boy . Third example is that he learned how to caver.Clearly I think hes going to become a caver plus he stay caver for 2 years.


Amy 605 said...

Dear Emily,

I like your blog post because your picture haves elephants and the story is about elephants.The best part of your essay is the examples.

Sincerely Amy Ortiz

Arlie 605 said...

Dear Emily,
I like it because it is really good and it has good details.

Kelvin 605 said...

Dear Emily

I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story

the best part is when you explain and gave example

one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces